First Radio Segment!
I chose to convert an article written in the Washington Post about the second time the Olympic flame went out in Russia.
http://www.washingtonpost.com/world/europe/russias-olympic-torch-flames-out-again/2013/10/07/04198cba-2f5f-11e3-9ddd-bdd3022f66ee_story.html
One thing I think I did well was edit out the long pauses between sentences. In order for the radio segment to flow, it was better to eliminate the long pauses because if not the person who is listening feels like a 40 second radio segment is going on forever.
The thing I could work on more is talking a bit more slowly and vocalizing better. In different parts of the radio segments I rushed through words which made them sound like a completely different word all together.
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